Recent essays I've written on Medium about Trump, the NFL, Beyoncé, etc.


Let’s Hear Jerry Jones Talk About Police Brutality

This generic “team unity” crap doesn’t actually mean anything


What Happened to the Middle?

We’re too busy hating to realize how much we have in common


Sean Spicer and the Lubrication of Fame

It’s as if the evil never even happened


It’s Beyonce vs. Trump

She represents love and beauty. He represents fear and hate.


It’s Not The Creature, It’s the Lagoon

Donald Trump isn’t happening to us. DONALD TRUMP IS US.


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Exploring dozens of choices until you come up with right punchline

10 Screenwriting Tips You Can Learn from The Breakfast Club offers this advice on dialogue.

CHALLENGE YOURSELF WITH DIALOGUE
There are very few movies as quotable as The Breakfast Club. Part of that is because Hughes was an insanely talented dialogue writer. But I’ve read some of Hughes’ unproduced scripts, and believe it or not, he doesn’t always come up with the goods. That tells me he worked extra hard on Club. One of the keys to coming up with great lines and sharp dialogue is to challenge yourself, to not go with the easy first choice, but to keep digging until you find something original. Your initial idea for a line may be “What an asshole.” But with a little work, you could come up with “That man…is a brownie hound.” Instead of “Nice outfit buddy,” how about exploring 20 more choices until you come up with, “Does Barry Manilow know that you raid his wardrobe?” Dialogue is about challenging yourself. It’s about not taking the easy way out. Clearly, Hughes practiced this philosophy in Club.


Reminds me of coming up with punchlines. How you have to come up with 20 choices before you get that perfect line. I wrestle with that a lot. The first thing that occurs to me feels like the irght choice but a lot of times it's too obvious. Once I really push is when things get weirder/surprising/funnier.

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Playlist with animations from my Hot Flashes album

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Why men should pay for dates



From my album HOT FLASHES. Check it here.

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